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Work Stress, Mental Health and Antidepressant Medication

Rawd Alach

Summary of Article: “Work Stress, Mental Health and Antidepressant Medication Finding from the Health 200 Study”

During recent years, there has been increasing concern about the effects of work stress on mental health.

There is speculation that work with high job demands and low job control, leads to depression and anxiety disorders.

Several theories have come to light attempting to detail the effects of work stress on individuals.

One such theory is the Job Strain Model, also called the Demand-Control Model. This theory endorses the idea that high job demand and low job control, i.e., high job strain, leads to mental health problems. Read the rest of this entry »

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Run-on Sentences

Run-on Sentences
Presented by: Rawd Alach

Definition: Run-on sentences are two or more sentences that have been joined together without a conjunction or the correct punctuation.

Run-on sentences run on for too long, hence their name.

They occur when one combines two or more sentences into one without proper punctuation. They can sometimes appear in a text without the writer noticing exposing them is not difficult. (Did you notice that was a run-on sentence?) A simple fix would be to place a period between “noticing” and “exposing”.

They can sometimes appear in a text without the writer noticing. Exposing them is not difficult. One way is to read the text out loud.

One will naturally pause at the end of a complete set of ideas where punctuation should be placed.

After a run-on sentence is revealed, it must be fixed. There are several ways to do so. Here is a run-on sentence. “They were laughing the joke was funny.” You can:

1. Place a period between the two sentences.
Ex: They were laughing. The joke was funny.

2. Use a semicolon to separate the two sentences.
Ex: They were laughing; the joke was funny.

3. Use a comma after the first sentence then add a word like and, or, yet, but, so.
Ex: They were laughing, and the joke was funny.

4. Use because between the two sentences.
Ex: They were laughing because the joke was funny.

Exercise!

Fix the run-on sentences as you like. Write your answer.

• Duke spilled milk on his cargo pants he didn’t care.

• Fernando is a lousy hair dresser he dyed my hair blonde instead of blue.

• Ligers are a cross between a lion and a tiger they can weigh up over 500 kilograms.
Fixed:

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